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Shroom
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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story   A Short Story I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 01, 2010 8:26 am

thats really good
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holysali
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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story   A Short Story I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 01, 2010 8:36 am

that took me about 20minutes to read and i thoroughly enjoyed it, i have to ask where did u get this from or so saying did you write this yourself, and if u did ur an amazing writer. You made my night.
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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story   A Short Story I_icon_minitimeTue Feb 02, 2010 9:03 pm

Haha mal - I thought the exact same thing about the ending and your input was fantastic. But yeah its an extremely solid start, nice work!
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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story   A Short Story I_icon_minitimeWed Feb 03, 2010 6:32 am

is tachi hotchick?
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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story   A Short Story I_icon_minitimeThu Feb 04, 2010 6:33 am

short story 
–noun
a piece of prose fiction, usually under 10,000 words.

Characters (no spaces) 45,940
Characters (with spaces) 57,040

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